Saturday, July 3, 2004

Historically, a good month for me

July’s Hazy Motives

 

So, on one white hot day

shelled by enduring haze

I elicit one last coherent breath

A sweet peace breeze duels my lungs

as I fall deep into simmering apathy

On the quiet night of a white hot day

cool tension flies with the wind

Hazy convincing glances offer clues of  a place to seek

And we secretly dash through another day

 

2 comments:

  1. I love "last coherent breath" and "cool tension."  Those two struck me as particularly ingenious.  Great graphic too.  ¤Holly

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  2. I love the smell of bottle rockets in the morning.
    PK

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